The examples below are real feedback clients of 3rd Party Feedback have received.

What Do You Do? Feedback:

It is impossible to say what it does. It appears to offer some sort of logo design or graphic design — perhaps focusing on interactive graphics online, graphics for marketing to consumers, and graphics for marketing to other businesses. However, that is just a guess. This website is terribly vague.

Based on the home page, I have absolutely no idea what this business does. 

I’m assuming it is something with web design, graphic design, advertising or internet marketing. Probably some sort of agency. But that’s only a guess. 

Even digging deeper into the site didn’t tell me.

It is not immediately clear what this business does. An introduction would help but after looking at the “see our work” section it seems they do some kind of marketing and branding for businesses.

It’s a business that helps you connect to other people and build your network.

It is an upscale casual Italian restaurant that features traditional Neapolitan-style pizza, antipasti, salads, and focaccia.

It appears to be a professional services company that can manage all aspects of a client’s online marketing from campaigns to optimization and analytics, and also provides training and consulting services for companies doing some or all of their online marketing in-house.

1-Thing To Improve Feedback:

The font is too thin and too small, making it hard to read. The copy contains many grammatical and stylistic errors and needs to be proofread. “**** ******” is a bad phrase. Regardless of whether it’s a term of art in the ******* industry, it should not be used because it is simply bad grammar, and not even witty enough to be a catch phrase. The sentence “*** ********* * ****** ****** ********* *** *******.” is repeated twice. Rewrite.

Page would be better if it was not white on black. That color scheme makes me think of a MySpace page, not a professional’s business page.

Maybe “welcome to my website” could be personalized more? Use that headline to quickly sum up who you are/what you do “**** *********, Your ******* Expert” or something.

Lots of dead space on the two side columns as the center column goes on and on. Might be worth considering moving that useful ‘******/********* tips’ info to one of the side columns.

The information is inviting, well written and makes one want to get to know you, but presented in a little bit cluttered manner. The text is too small for easy reading. Perhaps increase the size and change the background color. White on black is not the best combination for ease of reading.

The text could be bigger. It’s a little hard to read. Also, please add more pictures. It’s too text-heavy right now.

They need to say what the business does! I have absolutely no idea what kind of business this is from looking at the front page, and nothing compelled me to start digging deeper to try to find out.

Best Current Feature Examples:

The best feature of this website is that the menu and specials are easily accessable. That’s the most important thing a restaurant website can have, in my opinion.

I think the music and the voice is kind of cool. However, the best current feature is the flash animation. It makes the site look current and up to date.

It is immediately apparent what the company will do for you.

I like the layout of the page. It is very easy on the eyes, and easy to navigate.

The best feature of this site is one that more designers’ site should have: easy access to high-quality work samples. You wouldn’t hire a designer if you didn’t know what they had done previously, right?

Best feature is availability of current mortgage rates.

I like how it’s formatted. The articles are well-spaced and eye-friendly. Articles are interesting too.